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Correct these sentences: Bryan write in green, Shane write in blue, Adonais write in red, Jeremie write in purple, Mrs. Friedl write in pink.

China are nice and I walked my friends and familys outside are very beautiful

Shane: In China, outside was beaitufil and my friend, family, and we walked around.

Right after, i arrive in Oahu, Hawaii, my friend, Chantelle, and i are going to looking for the hotel.

Friedl- After I arrive in Oahu, Hawaii, my friend Chantelle and I are going to look for our hotel.

My frist time visit Japan Tokyo it really far away from USA America.

Bryan- __I am going to visit Tokyo, Japan and its my first time to visit there. It's really far away from the America.__

Today, We going to rent car then look around for hotel area by Beach.

Adonais- Today, we are going to rent a car then look around for hotel by the beach.